Crew Marsh have loved sharing their writing with their adults 💕
Sharing our ”The Tunnel” writing
Category : Writing
King Charles has lost his crown 👑
Awesome Authors! 🌟📝
Last week in Crew FE I was blown away with the fabulous writing that the children were producing! They have shown that they are able to use expanded noun phrases with prepositions, onomatopoeia and time fronted adverbials! Great work Crew FE! I am excited to share this with your grown ups next Wednesday afternoon and I am sure you are too!
Applying speech in MI
Today we wrote our next plot point as well as using the dialogue we built in our grammar lesson yesterday. Such resilience today in MI, we all ensured we advanced the action and we tried to describe the character a little more. Really great work today 🙂
Speech for our narrative in MI
During our grammar session, we looked at how we use speech accurately and all the features we need to include. After lots of shared ideas and practice, we worked on our own bits of speech for our narrative. This will help us in our writing lesson tomorrow when we start to work on our next plot point.
MI continue their narrative
Today MI returned to their suspense narrative where we added a change in location to our story, adding more detail for the reader.
Did the king find his crown at Big Ben?
In groups we tried to build the biggest tower using blocks to see if we could make Big Ben. Then we listened and counted how many chimes Big Ben did. He did 12 chimes which told us it was 12 O’clock – nearly our lunch time. Unfortunately, the king has still not found his crown!
I cannot wait to read Crew Marsh’s sentences tomorrow.
Vocabulary building
In writing, we have been working on some planning to support us with our plot points when we start writing. We have generated ambitious vocabulary and spoke about the importance of using words that we know the meaning of. This allows us to magpie ideas and use language we’d expect to see in year 5.
The London Eye 🎡
Did we manage to find the King his crown at the London Eye? The answer is no! We loved creating the London Eye outside and understanding how the pods constantly moved. We also loved watching videos of the views you can see from the eye. I cannot wait to read the writing tomorrow!
Super writers in Y1! ✏️
I have felt so proud this week of how far Crew Marsh has come with their independent writing. It has been great to see all of their amazing ideas and their new found confidence when putting pencil to paper. Special well done to my super writers of the session! 💕
